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Post by kanwal on May 12, 2007 0:08:20 GMT 5
"Khudari e hayaat ka sauda na kijiye" Duniya meiN apne aap ko ruswa na kijiye Nazuk haiN kaanch se bhi humari yeh uljhaneiN TooteiN na sar pe aapke uljha na kijiye Pehloo meiN aapke bhi to hoga zaroor yeh Dil pe humare zulm to itna na kijiye Tukre bhi karte jaate haiN is dil ke sath sath Us pe yeh hukM bhi hai ke noha na kijiye Soghaat le ke rah meiN kab se khare haiN hum NazreiN chura ke aap yuN guzra na kijiye Hum aa gaye jo zid pe to phir kya kareiN ge aap Aisa na kijiye are aisa na kijiye Gir ke zameeN par choor na ho jaaye ay KANWAL raaste meiN dil ko yuN uchhala na kijiye
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Post by uzair143 on May 12, 2007 0:31:34 GMT 5
Pehloo meiN aapke bhi to hoga zaroor yeh Dil pe humare zulm to itna na kijiye
kia khoob likha hai kanwal baji app ne maza a gia perh ker.waqi hi zabardast
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 12, 2007 13:26:47 GMT 5
BETEY HUEY PALOON KO BHULANEY K LEY . HAFEZAH KAMZOOR KERNA PAREY GAA .......... PER YEH ZULAM NA KERNA KABHE .......... j / k NICE ONE.... LIKE U WISH U ALL THE BEST KANWAL [/COLOR]
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Post by neha on May 12, 2007 14:26:28 GMT 5
Khudari e hayaat ka ,.... « Thread Started on Today at 12:08am »
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"Khudari e hayaat ka sauda na kijiye" Duniya meiN apne aap ko ruswa na kijiye
Nazuk haiN kaanch se bhi humari yeh uljhaneiN TooteiN na sar pe aapke uljha na kijiye
Pehloo meiN aapke bhi to hoga zaroor yeh Dil pe humare zulm to itna na kijiye
Tukre bhi karte jaate haiN is dil ke sath sath Us pe yeh hukM bhi hai ke noha na kijiye
Soghaat le ke rah meiN kab se khare haiN hum NazreiN chura ke aap yuN guzra na kijiye
Hum aa gaye jo zid pe to phir kya kareiN ge aap Aisa na kijiye are aisa na kijiye
Gir ke zameeN par choor na ho jaaye ay KANWAL raaste meiN dil ko yuN uchhala na kijiye
Kanwal ji...itny khubsurat ghazal hai k samajh nahin aa rahy k kaisay is ghazal ki tareef ka haq ada hoga....aur likhnay walay k baray main kia kahain janab .. aap ki poetry k tou hum wesay hi fan hain.n my favourite shair.....
Is dukh k zamanay main kanwal sab ko kaho tum Rotay huay logon ko hansa kiun nahin detay
mery taraf say dhairon daad qubool kijye .
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 12, 2007 23:28:48 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Kanwal ji magar image dosri ghazal ka lag gia hay theek kar lejiay ga
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Post by khalid on May 13, 2007 1:16:08 GMT 5
kaNval ghazal khoob hai! daad qubool keeje!
urdu maiN post kerda ghazal koii aur hai, aur maqte per bhi zara nzar e saani keejiyee
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Post by kanwal on May 14, 2007 15:49:23 GMT 5
Pehloo meiN aapke bhi to hoga zaroor yeh Dil pe humare zulm to itna na kijiye kia khoob likha hai kanwal baji app ne maza a gia perh ker.waqi hi zabardast Thank YOu uzair ,....
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Post by kanwal on May 14, 2007 15:49:45 GMT 5
waah kanwal ek aur tarahi ghazal jo bahut achhi lagi.dheron daad meri aur se. thank YOu sunita sis ,....
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Post by kanwal on May 14, 2007 15:51:55 GMT 5
BETEY HUEY PALOON KO BHULANEY K LEY . HAFEZAH KAMZOOR KERNA PAREY GAA .......... PER YEH ZULAM NA KERNA KABHE .......... j / k NICE ONE.... LIKE U WISH U ALL THE BEST KANWAL [/COLOR][/quote] ,....yeh to doosri ghazl thi ,... shayed jaldi meiN dheehan nahiN raha ,....... anyway bohat shukriya,.....
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Post by kanwal on May 14, 2007 15:56:27 GMT 5
Khudari e hayaat ka ,.... « Thread Started on Today at 12:08am » -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Khudari e hayaat ka sauda na kijiye" Duniya meiN apne aap ko ruswa na kijiye Nazuk haiN kaanch se bhi humari yeh uljhaneiN TooteiN na sar pe aapke uljha na kijiye Pehloo meiN aapke bhi to hoga zaroor yeh Dil pe humare zulm to itna na kijiye Tukre bhi karte jaate haiN is dil ke sath sath Us pe yeh hukM bhi hai ke noha na kijiye Soghaat le ke rah meiN kab se khare haiN hum NazreiN chura ke aap yuN guzra na kijiye Hum aa gaye jo zid pe to phir kya kareiN ge aap Aisa na kijiye are aisa na kijiye Gir ke zameeN par choor na ho jaaye ay KANWAL raaste meiN dil ko yuN uchhala na kijiye Kanwal ji...itny khubsurat ghazal hai k samajh nahin aa rahy k kaisay is ghazal ki tareef ka haq ada hoga....aur likhnay walay k baray main kia kahain janab .. aap ki poetry k tou hum wesay hi fan hain.n my favourite shair..... Is dukh k zamanay main kanwal sab ko kaho tum Rotay huay logon ko hansa kiun nahin detay mery taraf say dhairon daad qubool kijye . Neha sis,... Bas aik purkhaloos muskuraahat se ,...... Aapne pasand kiya mere liye ezaaz ki baat hai ,...
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Post by kanwal on May 14, 2007 15:57:24 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Kanwal ji magar image dosri ghazal ka lag gia hay theek kar lejiay ga lolz,....... Rafi jee pata hi nahiN chala yeh ghalti kab hui ,.... maine ab badal di hai ,... thank u tawajah dilaane ke liye ,...
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Post by Aqeel Malik on May 15, 2007 15:44:56 GMT 5
bahut khoob
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Post by HASIB RANA on May 15, 2007 17:48:44 GMT 5
BETEY HUEY PALOON KO BHULANEY K LEY . HAFEZAH KAMZOOR KERNA PAREY GAA .......... PER YEH ZULAM NA KERNA KABHE .......... j / k NICE ONE.... LIKE U WISH U ALL THE BEST KANWAL [/COLOR][/quote] ,....yeh to doosri ghazl thi ,... shayed jaldi meiN dheehan nahiN raha ,....... anyway bohat shukriya,..... [/quote] HUMMMMMMMMMMMM ......... MALOOM HAY ......... 3 DIN PEHLEY MAIN B YEH GHALTI KER CHUKA HOON ......... NAZAM KI JAGAH GHAZAL POST KER DE THE ............. KHAIR ........... NICE GHAZAL Pehloo meiN aapke bhi to hoga zaroor yeh Dil pe humare zulm to itna na kijiye KITNI DAD DOON ................. MERA KHYAL HAY KEH JITNI DAD B DAY DOON KAM ER JAEY GEE ........... IS SHEAR K SAMNEY ......... WISH U ALL THE BEST KANWAL .......... SDA MUSKORATI RAHOO
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Post by kanwal on May 16, 2007 1:07:33 GMT 5
kaNval ghazal khoob hai! daad qubool keeje!
Thank you jee ,.... aapko pasand aayee khushqismati meri ghazl ki ,.... Khalid jee bas woH ghalti ho gayeee ,.... Kabhi kabhi ghaltiyaN karte rehna chahiye, insaan insaan hi rehta hai ,.........
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Post by sumanshah on May 16, 2007 11:15:59 GMT 5
Adaaaaaaaaaaaaab kanwal
ye khubsoorat ghazal pehlay bhi nazar sey guzri hay. or aj phir issay parh kar utna hi acha laga jitna pehli bar parh kar laga thaaaaaa
bohat umdaaaaa khush raho
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