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Post by Ghazalsara on Jun 17, 2008 9:48:06 GMT 5
khayal-e-yar ko tanhai ka chara samajhtay hain ham aisay sada dil hain,dasht ko darya samajhtay hain mahabbat char soo hay,amn hay,rang-e-baharan hay naheen aisa magar kuch deedawar aisa samajhtay hain sar-e-tasleem kham kartay hain har zalim k aagay ham phir us k zulm ko taqdeer ka likha samajhtay hain karay jo narawa tanqeed apnay mulk-o-mazhab par ham us k geet gatay hain ,usay achcha samajhtay hain nikaltay hain bahut kam us say,aksar loog ,dikha hay Naveed ham un ko jitnay qaddoqamat ka samajhtay hain
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 17, 2008 10:16:53 GMT 5
Naveed Bhai! Bahut achhchhi ghazal hai daad qabool kijiay.
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Post by saeed on Jun 17, 2008 11:04:44 GMT 5
Naveed saheb- achi ghazal kahi hai aapney
buhut khub! Saeed
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 17, 2008 23:52:43 GMT 5
naveed sahab boht din baad aap ki ghazal parhanay ko mili ghazal sara ho k bhi aap ghazal sara kion nahi hotay tamaam ashaar aap k makhsoos ahang main hain khaas taur par yeh shair dil par naqsh ho gia sar-e-tasleem kham kartay hain har zalim k aagay ham phir us k zulm ko taqdeer ka likha samajhtay hain wah wah kia khoob kaha aap nay thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 18, 2008 1:34:34 GMT 5
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Post by suhailabbaskhan on Jun 18, 2008 6:45:15 GMT 5
naveed un ki ghazal per jub koii tunqeed kerta hay to phir uss ko adab ka woh koii bacha samajtay hain mfa elun mfa elun mfa elun mfa elun
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jun 18, 2008 18:32:32 GMT 5
aik arsa bad ap ki ghazal parhi aur nihayat tamaniat ka ehsas hoa ke bahut umda aur aik khas ahang ka lbada aurhay hoey hay ye ghazal
dad qabooleay ga
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Post by Ghazalsara on Jun 20, 2008 23:59:18 GMT 5
Naveed Bhai! Bahut achhchhi ghazal hai daad qabool kijiay.
Janb e man! shukria
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Post by Ghazalsara on Jun 21, 2008 0:04:03 GMT 5
Naveed saheb- achi ghazal kahi hai aapney buhut khub! Saeed aap ka mamnoon hon izzat afzai par
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Post by Ghazalsara on Jun 21, 2008 0:07:07 GMT 5
naveed sahab boht din baad aap ki ghazal parhanay ko mili ghazal sara ho k bhi aap ghazal sara kion nahi hotay tamaam ashaar aap k makhsoos ahang main hain khaas taur par yeh shair dil par naqsh ho gia sar-e-tasleem kham kartay hain har zalim k aagay ham phir us k zulm ko taqdeer ka likha samajhtay hain wah wah kia khoob kaha aap nay thanx razi Razi Bhai! oor bhi dukh hain zamanay main shairi k siwa. bas tabeeat idhar nahee aati.aap ki tawajju ka shkria
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Post by Ghazalsara on Jun 21, 2008 0:10:00 GMT 5
Rafi Bhai oor aqeel Bhai! aap dono hamaisha ki tarah mehrban hain.khas tor par rafi bhai jis sanhay say guzray us k bawjood is qadr bahadri se mutharrik hain.allah un k hoslay ziyad karay ..Aameen
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Post by Ghazalsara on Jun 21, 2008 0:16:13 GMT 5
naveed un ki ghazal per jub koii tunqeed kerta hay to phir uss ko adab ka woh koii bacha samajtay hain mfa elun mfa elun mfa elun mfa elun bahut hi mustanad hay aap ka farman Khan Sahib! ham apnay aap ko Ghalib,Wali,soda samajhtay hain Aap ki raay khlay dil se parhi jaay gi.Abhi khud ko tabdeel kar sakta hoon.
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Post by suhailabbaskhan on Jun 21, 2008 20:03:45 GMT 5
kary kia yeh keh iski dhawani ka russ anokha hay suhyail her sair ko haro kahan acha samaghta hay
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 11, 2008 13:26:06 GMT 5
naveed sahab faraib khud faraibi taqdeer parasti shakhsiat parasti hamaray zawal kay asbab hain jin ko bohot acchay andaz say aap nay apni gazal main bayan kia hay. aik acchi ghazal khanay per mairy tarf say dad qabool kijiay
dr zagham abidi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 30, 2008 23:44:46 GMT 5
Naveed bhai bahut mature ghazal hai aap ki! Baar-e-digar daad qabool kijiay!
Maqtay kay misraa=e=saani maiN "Naveed hum" ka idghaam nahiN ho rah jiss ki wajah say misraa behr say kharij ho raha hai. Yeh daikh lijiay.
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