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Post by Sukhanwar on May 24, 2008 23:52:47 GMT 5
akhtar shumar boht khoobsoorat ghazlain hain aik ghazal to main tum sy aik mushaairay main sun bhi chuka hoon albata doosri ghazal tujhy hansatay nahi daykha kai din pehli baar parhi lutf aa gia thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 25, 2008 0:04:06 GMT 5
Umda ghazlaiN haiN Shumaar Sahib, Daad qabool kijiay! Hal mim mazeed ka naaraa lag raha hai.......
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 25, 2008 0:47:07 GMT 5
Akhtar Shumar sahib khoobsoorat ghazalaiN ataa farmaiN aap nay shukria
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 1:32:00 GMT 5
Bohat Umdaa ,.... Bohat khubsoorat ghazls aapne parhne ko diN aap ne ,... Daad ke hazaaroN phooL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by tarana on May 25, 2008 3:13:43 GMT 5
Salamz!!! umda ghazlain aap ki likhi huee, perheen.....Arsaa daraaz huaa achi poetry perhay huee...dil khush ho gaya....Thanks
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Post by naheedv on May 25, 2008 6:07:30 GMT 5
Akhtar bhai, it's really good to see you here. It's Naheed from Michigan (agar aap ko yaad ho tau) kaisey haiN aap aur aap kaa project kaisaa jaa rahaa hai? mujhey yaad hai ke aap ne zikr kiyaa thaa ke aap urdu paRhaane misr yaa kisi dusree jaga jaa rahe thay, how's it going? aap kee ghazaleN agarche aap se sunee bhee theeN aur kitaab meN bhee haiN, magar inheN dobaarah se yahaaN paRh kar be.had achaa lagaa. ab aap yahaaN par aa gaye hain tau aap se baat cheet hoti rahe gee. shukriya Naheed
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Post by akhtarshumaar on May 25, 2008 23:01:39 GMT 5
"Dears," Thanks all 4 reading. AND NAHEED SEND ME YOUR E-MAIL AND PHONE NUMBER.
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Post by nadeem on May 26, 2008 13:27:43 GMT 5
muhtram Akhter shumaar Adaab aap ko yahan daikh kar hairat bhi hoi aur khushi bhi, aap ka jo sher mujhay bahut pasand hai wo aap bhi jantay ho sulagti haen meri poroon ki aankhaen tujhay cho kar nahen dekha kai din is sher maen tazgi kay sath sath khobsurati bhi bahut hai aur har lihaz say achay ashaar maen is ka shumaar hota hai aap ka phone number chahiey with contry coad dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy on May 26, 2008 22:35:49 GMT 5
Mohtram Akhter Shumar Sahib, Asslam u ALikum, aap kee donon ghazalin bohot hee achi aur khoobsorat hain, mujhhay bohot pasand aaye hain. meri tarf say dheroon daad qabool farmain. Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy
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Post by akhtarshumaar on May 27, 2008 13:46:22 GMT 5
Dear Nadeem Bhabha : Koshi hoi k ap ne rabta kia . Ho R U ? . Note contact : 0169196259
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Post by ibnesiddique on May 27, 2008 16:22:19 GMT 5
moHtaram Akhtar Shumaar saHib
aap ki ghazleN paRh kar lutf aa gayaa. meri jaanib se daad qubool farmaaiye.
Amjad
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Post by saeed on Jun 2, 2008 6:09:29 GMT 5
Shumar sb,
Buhut khoob!!! aapki pehli ghazal aapse Lahore mein pichley saal aamney-saamney beth ker bhi suni thi....isey parh ker khoobsurat yaden taza hogei hain.
Doosri ghazal bhi buhut anokhi kawish hai.....waaahhhh Matla buhut acha hai.....ye ashaar bilkhasoos buhut pasand aaye.
Hawa kiya le uRi us naqsh-e-pa ko bhatakta reh gaya sehraa kei din
teri nazroN ki kirneiN kiya paRi theiN Tar-o-taza raha chehra kei din
buhut daad. Saeed
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 30, 2008 20:34:54 GMT 5
Dr Sb aap ki ghazlaiN ghaeb ho gayee haiN. Ba-raah-e-karam inn ki location ka baaray maiN aagaah kijiay.
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Post by zaki on Sept 15, 2008 10:47:41 GMT 5
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