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Post by dr.najma shaheen on May 24, 2008 6:23:00 GMT 5
TUM POOCHHTAY HO //??
Tum poochhtay ho ?
Mere aankhoon ka haal kaisa hay ?
Kia waqat ki kuchh lakairain hain
Yaa phir maazi jaisa hay
Meray baaloon ki rangatt kaisi hay?
Unn main woohi siahi hay
Yaa chaandi ki rangatt chhaie hay
Tum poochhtay ho ? Meray khad-o-khaal kaisay hain
Zamaanay kay naqash hain inn main
Yaa bichharrtay lamhoon jaisay hain Tum poochhtay ho ?
Tummhaaray hoontoon ki muskaan kaisi hay Dard bharay inn maossamoon main
Wuhi khilkhilaahat chhaie hay
Yaa dard kay peechhay darmaan jaisi hay ? Subb poochha tum nay Magar naa poochha
Rooh kay karb ki aziatt kia hay ?
Larrkharrati khawhishoon ko
Abdi neend sulla kay
Khud pay jabbar ki haqeeqat kia hay
Kionkay tum jantay ho Keh inn beetay lamhoon main
Iss ahiday farad main
Meray dil ki iss weeraani ka
Khushi say budgumaani ka Zindgi say prayshaani ka
Sabbab tum hi to ho ‘;//
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 25, 2008 0:50:04 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 2:39:47 GMT 5
Achi nazM hai ,... daad e guL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 31, 2008 21:51:12 GMT 5
poem pasand karnay kaliay sab dostoon ka shukria,,,,,,
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Post by Sukhanwar on Aug 7, 2008 0:13:33 GMT 5
achi koshish hy dr sahiba thanx razi
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Aug 7, 2008 13:12:24 GMT 5
razi sb kanwal jee and raffi sb ap sab ka bahut ziada shukria... umeed hay agay bhi ap logon ka tawun rahaiga
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meena
ibtidaai rukn
Posts: 29
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Post by meena on Aug 12, 2008 17:23:45 GMT 5
WONDERFUL..........!
AMAZING................!!
meena
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Post by uzair143 on Sept 30, 2008 11:38:01 GMT 5
wwwaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh Uzair Saleem
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Oct 8, 2008 21:34:08 GMT 5
uzair sb thank u so much
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zaki
sukhanshanas
Posts: 446
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Post by zaki on Oct 31, 2008 11:02:22 GMT 5
Wah bahut he umdah nazam ....... Sada khush raheay...
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jooni
sukhanshanas
Posts: 480
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Post by jooni on Oct 31, 2008 18:53:58 GMT 5
Achhi nazm hai.
Daad qubool kijiye.
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Nov 3, 2008 21:04:46 GMT 5
jooni sahib .. bahut bahut shukria
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maya
rukn
Posts: 143
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Post by maya on Nov 7, 2008 11:55:58 GMT 5
Najama sahaba ruh ky dard aur uski kafiat ka umda bayan hay.meri tarf sy be daad qabool kejeay ga.
waslam
fatimah
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 31, 2009 15:18:59 GMT 5
maya gee bahut bahut shukria
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